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  • #16
    Re: My first fan fic

    Ersh, tactics coming late here...

    Eye of Ran II vs Gross Surgical Malpractice

    We know this, not a bad battle Harry.

    Wedginator 9.0 vs CrOoKeD EvO

    I think my lifting arm spikes can penetrate his own flipper (surface area rule dictates that if the force of the whole robot goes into a single point, it gets under the same robot if it had a flat wedge instead of spikes and christ I may be talking utter bullocks now ), so I'll get under him, drag him to the pit and drop him in.

    Vertical Limit vs No Consequences

    I honestly have no idea.

    Fissure vs O.I.D

    See above.

    Wedga Triton vs Flick Of The Wrist

    Not much Wedga can do to Flick, unless he tries to stack Flick. Flick's easily stackable, but if that's not the case, Flick will win.

    Jinx vs Sheer Drunk Attack 2

    lol inside joke, anyway I'd honestly love to see how well SHA fares against an extremely low scoop like Jinx's, especially since the scoop's got more than double the armour of the rest of Jinx on it. I'll try to axe his tracks off while keeping the scoop in front of him at all times, however I'd like to stop the drum before I axe him, don't want the axe ripped off.

    g'luck peeps

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    • #17
      Re: My first fan fic

      Thanks Kody...

      I think i could write the next battle a bit longer and have the battle a bit longer...

      but other than that i think my battle was ok..

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      • #18
        Re: My first fan fic

        Hey guys

        im sorry if i don't post the battles quickly anough. Im really busy at the moment with freinds and family
        coming round and stuff.

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        • #19
          Re: My first fan fic

          Harry: Hello and welcome to M.F.F.F!
          I€™m your host/commentator Harry Orr!
          Tonight we have 2 robots battling it
          out to get to the next round!

          Entered Kody Kunz€¦Wedginator 9.0!
          Entered by Jack Orr€¦CrOoKeD EvO!

          both robots are ready, So lets get on with the FIGHTING!

          €œPlays auto-glass advert€

          3€¦2€¦1€¦ACTIVATE

          And both robots€¦ don€™t move? what? we didn€™t want to see this! we wanted to see destruction not€¦this! Oh wait! both robots moving again and wedginator gets under CrOoKeD EvO and uses his lifting spikes to lift him up€¦and over! but when CrOoKeD EvO self righted wedginator rammed CrOoKeD EvO into the side wall. Now wedginator is trying to lift CrOoKeD EvO
          out of the arena! and wedginator is doing so well and€¦and€¦and€¦CrOoKeD Evo has disappeared! where has he gone! But look here comes CrOoKeD EvO from behind! CrOoKeD EvO when he was just about to get flipped out of the arena saw his chance and drove off the spikes! now instead of CrOoKeD EvO going to flip wedginator out of the arena but instead gone for the pit release! Now wedginator has gone over to try and pit CrOoKeD EvO. Now CrOoKeD EvO has driven onto wedginators wedge and wedginator is going for the pit! and€¦ CrOoKeD EvO drive off the wedge and€¦goes round the pit! now wedginator has to make a massive turn to avoid driving into the pit and€¦€¦€¦€¦makes the turn spectacularly! now CrOoKeD EvO has driven around the back of wedginator and€¦a MASSIVE flip made by CrOoKeD EvO and wedginantor is on the drop-zone!
          What will we be dropping today? is it? a WASHING MACHINE! the washing machine weighs about 200kg and would really damage wedginators armor. wedginator has self-righted but its no use, the washing machine has fallen and€¦SMASH! But straight after the washing machine fell wedginator has driven out of the drop zone and gone straight for CrOoKeD EvO! CrOoKeD EvO has driven slightly slower at wedginator and€¦ CrOoKeD EvO is on wedginators spikes and the 2 robots are dangerously close to the pit and one lift from the spikes and€¦ CrOoKeD EvO IS IN THE PIT!!!!!
          CEASE!

          So Kody with his robot wedginator storms through to the next round.
          But Jack, you still have the losers mega melee!


          You wanna to see more battles? Then tune in next time on M.F.F.F good night!

          A bit longer than the other battles...quite good i have to admit...

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          • #20
            Re: My first fan fic

            Impressive battle, Harry. Good job making it to where Wedginator 9.0 barely defeated CrOoKeD eVo.

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            • #21
              Re: My first fan fic

              w00t, 9.0's debut is a success

              Cheers

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              • #22
                Re: My first fan fic

                *shakes kodys virtual hand*

                harry: fair play, that was a good fight m8

                kody: well done, you deserved that win, but watch out, iv got something planned that will kick your virtual ass :P
                a la prochaine

                jack

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                • #23
                  Re: My first fan fic

                  Originally posted by team_orr
                  ive got something planned that will kick your virtual ass
                  What? Mythras Evo?

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                  • #24
                    Re: My first fan fic

                    thats already been done :wink:

                    and btw, in your fight mark, u said mythras had its wheels teared clean of the motor shaft...their not attached to the motor shaft, there's a chain system :P

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                    • #25
                      Re: My first fan fic

                      Sorry about that, but maybe you should put down some stats for it using my standard stat sheet.

                      You don't have to, but it would be nice if you would, since I didn't know that before.

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                      • #26
                        Re: My first fan fic

                        Harry: Hello and welcome to M.F.F.F! I€™m your host Harry Orr! Tonight instead of me being the commentator we are going to have a different commentator called Flynn! He is a good friend of mine from school and he wants to be commentator so I said yes and hear he is!

                        Flynn: Hello Harry and I€™m very happy to be on the show! Tonight we have a full body ring spinner with a lifting arm and one of the most destructive vertical spinners on the show!

                        Here are the robots fighting today!

                        Entered by Joey Mcconnell, No Consequences!
                        This full body spinner will bash and smash the other robots to pieces! Also No consequences as a powerful lifting arm to self write itself and even flip other robots up and OVER!

                        Entered by Nick, Vertical limits!
                        As I said Vertical Limits is one of the most powerful vertical spinners out there, not to mention one of the most powerful spinners.
                        So this robot is definitely got a chance in this fight with that spinning disk!

                        So I think anything could happen in this fight!

                        So here we go!

                        *Plays Dominos Advert*

                        The house robots are Shunt and Sir Killalot

                        3€¦2€¦1€¦ACTIVATE!

                        And in comes Vertical Limits charging Forwards with its vertical disk spinning up to full speed, No Consequences is hiding in the shadows for the best moment€¦and€¦No consequences has taken his time and gone in the lifting arm! FLIP! FLIP! Vertical Limits is being chucked all over the place! Now it looks like Vertical Limits is retreating and trying to spin up his disk and VROOOOOOOOOM! Now the disk has really sped up and he has gone round the back of No Consequences and CRASH! Vertical Limits has hit No Consequences back armour and there is a massive gash!

                        Now No Consequences is going round and round and round...Oh I€™m dizzy by watching No Consequences going round and round! And Vertical Limits is charging towards No Consequences that€™s not a good idea made by Nick and€¦CRASH! Vertical Limits has gone spinning into Shunts CPZ! And shunt doesn€™t like that, Shunt doesn€™t like anyone in his CPZ and the axe has gone down CRASH! And Vertical Limits has zoomed out of the CPZ and straight onto No Consequences flipping arm and FLIP!
                        Vertical Limit has been tossed over again by No Consequences! And the disk on Vertical Limits is spinning down and down and Vertical Limits chance of winning this fight Is getting lower and lower and lower!

                        There€™s only 30 seconds left and if Vertical Limits wants a chance to win this he has to some how immobilize No Consequences in the time remaining.
                        Now the disk is spinning very fast and is charging at No Consequences! CRASH! No Consequences has been toppled over by the hit made by Vertical Limits. Can he self right? Come on! Lift€¦lift€¦so close can he self right? Lift€¦And he€™s self righted! I almost thought he was going to be counted out of this fight!

                        And there€™s 10 seconds left of the fight and I don€™t think anybody in this fight is going to immobilize the other opponent!
                        CEASE!

                        And after bashing and crashing no body knows who is going to win this fight apart from the judges!
                        Well this is a very close call on points only a 10point difference who will win? Vertical Limits or No consequences? And the winner is€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦..With a total of 30points€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦.No Consequences!!!!!!!!!!!! Back to you Harry!
                        Harry: Well, was that close! A 10point difference! Wow I still can€™t get over that! So No Consequences is the winner of that fight!
                        Do you want to see more destruction? Tune in next time on M.F.F.F goodnight!

                        Sorry for the long wait, haven't found the time

                        Harry

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                        • #27
                          Re: My first fan fic

                          Harry: Hello, and welcome to MFFF! I€™m your host Harry Orr, tonight we have to very good robots fighting it out to get through to the next round and, maybe win the competition! Over to you Flynn in the crows nest!

                          Flynn: Thanks Harry, here are the robots fighting it out!

                          Entered by Andrew Jackson, Fissure!
                          This robot has a very nice lifting arm that can flip any robot up and either stack it on its side or flip it over!
                          So overall I think this robot has a very good chance if winning this battle.

                          Entered by Jack Orr, O.I.D!
                          This robot has a powerful horizontal spinning disk that can destroy any robot anytime, anywhere!
                          So this battle will be VERY hard for both robots to win this!

                          Now the battle!

                          House Robots are: Sir Killalot and Dead Metal!

                          Bot 1. Fissure
                          Bot 2. O.I.D

                          3€¦2€¦1€¦ACTIVATE!

                          And Fissure is charging down the arena floor, ready to flip some robots! At the same time O.I.D€™s disk is spinning up to full pelt and now both robots are ready to destroy each other!
                          O.I.D is now doing the same and charging down the arena floor, So both robots are about to hit each other I can see that€™s about to happen and€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦₠¬Â¦CRASH!
                          Both robots have been chucked across the arena! Now Fissure self-writes and is going for the pit release€¦Down it comes!

                          Here O.I.D comes! Charging down the arena and...OH NO! Fissure has flipped O.I.D onto its side and it looks like Fissure is pushing him into Dead Metals CPZ! Ohhhh! The disk on Dead Metal is going into O.I.D€™s armour!
                          Now there€™s a MASSIVE gash in O.I.DS armour!
                          O.I.D is back on his feet and is driving away as fast as he can to get out of trouble!

                          And O.I.D has driven onto Fissures wedge and FLIP! O.I.D once again gets flipped over.
                          I don€™t think there€™s much time left about 1 minute left!

                          So 1 minute left in the battle, the tensions really on for both competitors to definitely win this...Ohhhh! Even I am nervous!!!
                          O.I.D is on the move and€¦charging down the arena floor€¦CRASH! That hit will definitely had points to O.I.D€™s final score!

                          And I think there€™s 20 seconds left and counting!

                          Now O.I.D knows that he doesn€™t have enough time to beat Fissure unless suddenly Fissure mysteriously brakes down or Fissure drives in the pit for some reason. And there€™s no time left!

                          CEASE!

                          So it has gone to a judges decision and here€™s what the scores are:

                          Fissure: 8 points
                          O.I.D: 9 points

                          WOW! That was a close battle but the judge€™s made there decision and that€™s what they agreed on!

                          Want to see more action? Tune in next time on M.F.F.F good night!

                          What you think of the battle? Just post and say what I can improve on so the next battle could be much better 

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                          • #28
                            Re: My first fan fic

                            I think I shall let Joey give the advice. I'm still recovering from the ROFL spill I just had from reading that.

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