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  • #31
    SHW tournament

    Here is Fight #2

    Revolver VS Tax Cutter

    Our House Robots are Mr Physco and Cassius Chrome

    3-2-1-Activate!

    And Tax Cutter charges over to Revolver who is trying to get his disk up to speed,
    Crash!
    Tax Cutter has stopped the blade with only a small gash on the front, and that deadly axe is in line with one of revolvers wheels
    Crunch!
    the axe has missed the wheel and has punctured the body work, Revolver has broken free and the disk is now up to speed and revolver now moves towards Tax Cutter
    Crash!
    Tax Cutter manouvers out of the way and revolver hits the arena wall, and the disk doesnt seem to be moving, so Tax Cutter comes in and
    Smash!
    The axe has damaged the wheel of Revolver, who is now limping across the arena, bute the disk is working again, Tax Cutter comes in from behind
    Crunch!
    The other rear wheel is damaged but the disk
    is up to top speed
    Smash!
    Tax Cutter got to near to the disk and has paid the price, hes been flung a good few metres across the arena, doing a complete roll, but lands on his wheels, a huge gash down the side now
    Revolver is not moving and Tax Cutter has suffered the same fate, but who stopped moving first, and the judjes have given it to



    Tax Cutter!

    Tax cutter goes through
    Revolver A Little Help From His Freinds

    Next fight: Drive VS Back With You

    And the rules say you have to eliminate 1 half of the clusterbot to win!

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    • #32
      SHW tournament

      Here is Fight #2

      Revolver VS Tax Cutter

      Our House Robots are Mr Physco and Cassius Chrome

      3-2-1-Activate!

      And Tax Cutter charges over to Revolver who is trying to get his disk up to speed,
      Crash!
      Tax Cutter has stopped the blade with only a small gash on the front, and that deadly axe is in line with one of revolvers wheels
      Crunch!
      the axe has missed the wheel and has punctured the body work, Revolver has broken free and the disk is now up to speed and revolver now moves towards Tax Cutter
      Crash!
      Tax Cutter manouvers out of the way and revolver hits the arena wall, and the disk doesnt seem to be moving, so Tax Cutter comes in and
      Smash!
      The axe has damaged the wheel of Revolver, who is now limping across the arena, but the disk is working again, Tax Cutter comes in from behind
      Crunch!
      The other rear wheel is damaged but the disk
      is up to top speed
      Smash!
      Tax Cutter got to near to the disk and has paid the price, hes been flung a good few metres across the arena, doing a complete roll, but lands on his wheels, a huge gash down the side now
      Revolver is not moving and Tax Cutter has suffered the same fate, but who stopped moving first, and the judjes have given it to



      Tax Cutter!

      Tax cutter goes through
      Revolver needs A Little Help From His Freinds

      Next fight: Drive VS Back With You

      And the rules say you have to eliminate 1 half of the clusterbot to win!

      (Message edited by neontetra23 on July 16, 200

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      • #33
        SHW tournament

        Quite good for a first try Ben, keep it up

        Although Revolver wouldnt have even put a gash in Tax Cutters 8mm hardox, however small. And in future people will want to know what criteria/points are given in the decision, head over to Robot SMASH!! Series 2: Recharged now if you want an idea, I just posted a fight with a decision.

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        • #34
          SHW tournament

          well I suppose everyone makes mistakes
          How was the first fight?

          (Message edited by neontetra23 on July 16, 200

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          • #35
            SHW tournament

            Seems good to me, but that fight was waaaaaaaaaaay to short for it to be 12 seconds before the end, it wss more like a 30 second fight or something.

            Otherwise good

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            • #36
              SHW tournament

              I second Liams sentiments, too short and slightly lacking in detail, but could be worse.

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              • #37
                SHW tournament

                *agrees with the above statements*

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                • #38
                  SHW tournament

                  Continuation...

                  Drive vs Back With You

                  Our house roboots will be Mathilda and Dead Metal

                  3-2-1 Activate

                  Drive speeds towards Back To Rock and..
                  Slam!
                  The front spikes of Drive are stuck in the scoop of Back To Rock, meanwhile, With You has pressed the pit button, and Back to rock has lifted Drive into the air, and his heading towards the pit, its all over, Drives speed has been his downfall, hes in the pit, what a short battle, 17 seconds

                  Drive needs to take his driving test again
                  Back With You go through

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                  • #39
                    SHW tournament

                    of course Im glad I won, but seeing youre a newcomer writer I shall give you some tips to improve further

                    your first 2 battles were good, alot better than your third one, is it because youre getting tired with this tournament? (a problem seen more often) if so, I strongly advise you NOT to start big tournaments soon (like 16 people, 8 robots). I know some battles can be short, but still, its not smart to take advantage of that too often, you wont learn much from writing battles like this.

                    Your first 2 battles were pretty nice though, try to write more like that and improve a bit.

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                    • #40
                      SHW tournament

                      Yes, due to lack of interest

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                      • #41
                        SHW tournament

                        ok, then I strongly advise you NOT to open a tournament containing more than 8 robots anytime soon, losing interest can dissapoint a LOT of people who were looking forward to a certain tournament

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                        • #42
                          SHW tournament

                          Final match of round 1

                          Puzzel vs Red Knight

                          Our house robots are Sgt Bash and Sir K

                          3-2-1 activate

                          Both robots move nervously towards each other, the Puzzel nips round the side of Red Knight, but the turret follows him, round and round, but now Puzzel reverses and spins round and
                          Flip!
                          Red Knight now on his back, in comes Puzzel pushing towards the wall and,
                          Flip!
                          On the fence, and hes still in, but on his side, Red Knight now has rolled onto his back and is self-righting but here comes Puzzel
                          Smash!
                          Red Knight has self-righted and Puzzel has smashed into the fence, hes now turning round, and hes fired his flipper
                          Smash!
                          the rams have been severed, the flipper is useless, and now hes being pushed towards Bash, but hes escaped, Red Knight is charging toward Puzzel
                          Smash!
                          Red Knight has driven over Puzzel and the arm has become lodged on the arena wall, in comes the Refbot
                          10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1
                          Cease!
                          Its all over

                          Red Knight retreats back to his castle

                          Puzzel goes through

                          2nd round line-up:
                          Back With You vs Ziggy
                          Tax Cutter vs Puzzel

                          Tatics, strategies, a straight-jacket

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                          • #43
                            SHW tournament

                            Cant be bothered with Tactics

                            Here i go again

                            Our house robots are Growler and Cassius Chrome

                            3-2-1 Activate!

                            Ziggy and Back to rock meet in the centre, Ziggy pushing Back to rock towards the wall, meanwhile With you has pushed the pit button, Hmm same tactics as last time it would seem, Back to rock slips away but now Ziggy has gone after With you and
                            Fa-Lip!
                            With you is heading OOTA, but wait, Back to rock has crept up behind Ziggy and pushed him into the pit.
                            Cease!

                            The Judges are just reviewing the footage, here are the results:

                            Back with you was eliminated at 0:26.7
                            Ziggy was eliminated at 0:26.5

                            Ziggy wins!

                            Back with you goes back without the trophy
                            Ziggy advances to the final

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                            • #44
                              SHW tournament

                              Fights could be better, but meh.

                              Tactics: Ram to death or to pit. Also, bash up Puzzels flipper so he cant use it.

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                              • #45
                                SHW tournament

                                Puzzel vs Tax Cutter

                                Our house robots are Growler and Shunt

                                3-2-1 Activate!

                                Puzzel sets off towards Tax Cutter and down comes the axe
                                Crash!
                                the axe has missed and been impaled in the floor, Puzzel comes round the side and
                                Fa-lip
                                Tax Cutter is flung through the air, doing 2 complete rolls, Puzzel now coming in from the other side and
                                Fa-lip
                                another fantastic flip, Tax Cutter has been thrown right into the pit release, but he has landed on his wheels, but here comes Puzzel
                                Slam!
                                Puzzel crashes into Tax Cutter trying to push him towards Shunt, this is an absolute deadlock, but wait! Tax Cutter is pushing Puzzel towards the pit!, it may be slow progress, but it looks like its all over for Puzzel, he just cant escape, and just to add insult to injury, or should that be injury to insult, Tax Cutter has fired his axe and has made a huge slice in Puzzels flipper, but it seems to be stuck, Puzzel now teetering over the edge of the pit, he fires his flipper as a last desperate attempt to save himself
                                Cease
                                and its worked!, Puzzels flipper has flipped and swung Tax Cutter over himself using the connection made by Tax Cutters axe and into the pit, he may have followed Tax Cutter in but a win is a win, how unexpected

                                Tax Cutter needs to pay tax on some new parts
                                Puzzel is into the final

                                Final!:
                                Ziggy vs Puzzel
                                Its an all flipper final!

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