Re: crazy bots 2.0.
lol, not bad, descriptive and to the point.
Two things though...try to make the fights a bit more exciting (without going overboard of course), you know, jazz them up a bit. Also, try and make them a bit longer. If I stretch out that paragraph, it's barely 3 and a half lines long (on the family computer anyway :P).
Just some friendly advice.
lol, not bad, descriptive and to the point.

Two things though...try to make the fights a bit more exciting (without going overboard of course), you know, jazz them up a bit. Also, try and make them a bit longer. If I stretch out that paragraph, it's barely 3 and a half lines long (on the family computer anyway :P).
Just some friendly advice.

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