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It has to be one, it portrays the name of the robot so well. The halo needs to look more like it is going around the sword. It looks more like its slapped on top of it. The width of the halo would be thinner the further away it is from the camera.
2 does look good but the lightning needs a bit of work IMO. Now I am not a lightning expert but I believe they look like plant roots made of light.
http://static.howstuffworks.com/gif/lightning-gallery-18.jpghttp://static.howstuffworks.com/gif/...gallery-18.jpg
http://www.ilankelman.org/disasterdeaths/lightning.jpghttp://www.ilankelman.org/disasterdeaths/lightning.jpg
http://mcgonnigle.files.wordpress.com/2007/02/lightning.jpghttp://mcgonnigle.files.wordpress.co.../lightning.jpg
I would say yours are a bit too uniform, some need to be a little bit thicker then others. There need s to be a glow. Very easy in photoshop or paintshop pro. Duplicate lightning layer and move to back, fill color yellow (or what ever color you want), gaussian blur back layer.
Third one looks like too much is going on. Its good but not as good as the others.
Im not an illustrator but I do have a bit of an eye for these things. They all look nice and would make good posters.
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It has to be one, it portrays the name of the robot so well. The halo needs to look more like it is going around the sword. It looks more like its slapped on top of it. The width of the halo would be thinner the further away it is from the camera.
2 does look good but the lightning needs a bit of work IMO. Now I am not a lightning expert but I believe they look like plant roots made of light.
http://static.howstuffworks.com/gif/lightning-gallery-18.jpghttp://static.howstuffworks.com/gif/...gallery-18.jpg
http://www.ilankelman.org/disasterdeaths/lightning.jpghttp://www.ilankelman.org/disasterdeaths/lightning.jpg
http://mcgonnigle.files.wordpress.com/2007/02/lightning.jpghttp://mcgonnigle.files.wordpress.co.../lightning.jpg
I would say yours are a bit too uniform, some need to be a little bit thicker then others. There need s to be a glow. Very easy in photoshop or paintshop pro. Duplicate lightning layer and move to back, fill color yellow (or what ever color you want), gaussian blur back layer.
Third one looks like too much is going on. Its good but not as good as the others.
Im not an illustrator but I do have a bit of an eye for these things. They all look nice and would make good posters.
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